Homepage scorecard · Tue Nov 10, 2026
Old Navy
Verdict · rubric v1.0, pre-calibration
Strong
33/40
- Lowest dimension
- Headline, 2/5

Dimensions
- HeadlineJudgment
1 of 2 checks pass. Product category in view: Cookie notice covers the lower viewport, under 80%. Unobstructed part has only brand names, "40% Off Everything" and "Search for your fave"…
- Value & differentiationJudgment
All 3 checks pass. Concrete benefit: Visible claims are only "Free shipping on orders $50+ for Encore Members" and a 40% off sale.
- Design & hierarchyBoth
4 of 5 checks pass. Heading in first screen: fail.
- Copy & voiceJudgment
Both checks pass. Original wording: "Friends & Family Event" and "Ask Navy" are somewhat distinctive, but main copy "40% Off Everything" and "Shop Now" are stock.
- Call to actionBoth
1 of 2 checks pass. Main button in first screen: fail.
- RelevanceBoth
Both checks pass. Guest access: "Shop Now" and search are available; "Sign In or Join Now" is optional and the 40% off offer needs no account.
- TrustBoth
Both checks pass. Logo in header: "OLD NAVY" wordmark is clearly legible in the header.
- Technical hygieneCheck
3 of 5 checks pass. Page heading: fail. Text size: fail.
Checks
- FailProduct category in viewCookie notice covers the lower viewport, under 80%. Unobstructed part has only brand names, "40% Off Everything" and "Search for your fave"; no clothing category word or product shown.
- FailPage heading
- PassLive hero text
- PassHero offerHero banner reads "Friends & Family Event" and "40% Off Everything" with "Shop Now", an active promotional offer, unobstructed.
- FailHeading in first screen
- FailText size
- PassSingle focal pointGreen hero with "40% Off Everything" is the dominant block, roughly 40% or more of the unobstructed area, with clear priority.
- FailMain button in first screen
- PassMain button labelThe most prominent control outside nav and overlay is "Shop Now", which begins with the imperative verb "Shop".
- PassSearch in first screen
- PassMenu button
- PassOpen search box
- PassHTTPS certificate
- PassImage loading
- PassLogo in header"OLD NAVY" wordmark is clearly legible in the header.
- PassOverlay size
- PassFirst screen unobstructedOnly a bottom privacy and cookie notice with no email field, about 33% of the height. No signup modal.
- PassPage load
- PassConcrete benefitVisible claims are only "Free shipping on orders $50+ for Encore Members" and a 40% off sale. The free shipping minimum is a checkable service claim.
- PassStore-specific benefitFree shipping over $50 is generic, but "Encore Members" is the store's own named loyalty program tied to the offer.
- PassOffer terms"40% Off Everything" shows amount, "Ends 11/11. Exclusions apply."; free shipping shows "$50+" and a "Details" link.
- PassOriginal wording"Friends & Family Event" and "Ask Navy" are somewhat distinctive, but main copy "40% Off Everything" and "Shop Now" are stock. "Search for your fave" is a playful turn of phrase.
- PassTyposNo misspellings or grammar errors visible; "ails" is a cut-off word at the screen edge, and the cookie text reads correctly.
- PassGuest access"Shop Now" and search are available; "Sign In or Join Now" is optional and the 40% off offer needs no account.
- PassCurrency and region
- PassContact or help link
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