Homepage scorecard · Mon Nov 9, 2026
Old Navy
Verdict · rubric v1.0, pre-calibration
Strong
33/40
- Lowest dimension
- Headline, 2/5

Dimensions
- HeadlineJudgment
1 of 2 checks pass. Product category in view: Cookie privacy panel covers about 35% of viewport, not 80%, but unobstructed part shows only brand names…
- Value & differentiationJudgment
All 3 checks pass. Concrete benefit: Only "40% Off Everything" and "Free shipping on orders $50+" are visible; the shipping claim has a minimum spend number…
- Design & hierarchyBoth
4 of 5 checks pass. Heading in first screen: fail.
- Copy & voiceJudgment
Both checks pass. Original wording: "Friends & Family Event" and "Ask Navy" go beyond stock phrases, but main copy is a stock discount line…
- Call to actionBoth
1 of 2 checks pass. Main button in first screen: fail.
- RelevanceBoth
Both checks pass. Guest access: Hero offers "Shop Now" and nav without sign-in; "Sign In or Join Now" is optional and no layer demands an account.
- TrustBoth
Both checks pass. Logo in header: "OLD NAVY" wordmark is large and legible in the header.
- Technical hygieneCheck
3 of 5 checks pass. Page heading: fail. Text size: fail.
Checks
- FailProduct category in viewCookie privacy panel covers about 35% of viewport, not 80%, but unobstructed part shows only brand names, search placeholder and "40% Off Everything"; no product or category word.
- FailPage heading
- PassLive hero text
- PassHero offerUnobstructed hero reads "Friends & Family Event" and "40% Off Everything" with "Shop Now", a clear promotional offer.
- FailHeading in first screen
- FailText size
- PassSingle focal pointGreen hero with large "40% Off Everything" is the dominant block, though the cookie panel and top banners crowd it; hero still reaches roughly 40% of unobstructed area.
- FailMain button in first screen
- PassMain button labelMost prominent CTA in the hero is "Shop Now", which begins with the imperative verb "Shop".
- PassSearch in first screen
- PassMenu button
- PassOpen search box
- PassHTTPS certificate
- PassImage loading
- PassLogo in header"OLD NAVY" wordmark is large and legible in the header.
- PassOverlay size
- PassFirst screen unobstructedBottom privacy and cookie notice covers about 35% of the height with no email or SMS field; no promotional signup modal.
- PassPage load
- PassConcrete benefitOnly "40% Off Everything" and "Free shipping on orders $50+" are visible; the shipping claim has a minimum spend number, a checkable service claim.
- PassStore-specific benefit"Free shipping on orders $50+ for Encore Members" names the store's own loyalty program, "Encore Members".
- PassOffer terms"40% Off Everything" shows amount, "Ends 11/11. Exclusions apply." gives date and exclusions; shipping offer shows $50+ and "Details".
- PassOriginal wording"Friends & Family Event" and "Ask Navy" go beyond stock phrases, but main copy is a stock discount line; the event name and "Search for your fave" tip it to pass.
- PassTyposNo misspelled word or grammar error visible; "fave" is casual styling and "ils" is a word cut off at the screen edge.
- PassGuest accessHero offers "Shop Now" and nav without sign-in; "Sign In or Join Now" is optional and no layer demands an account.
- PassCurrency and region
- PassContact or help link
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