Homepage scorecard · Mon Nov 2, 2026
Old Navy
Verdict · rubric v1.0, pre-calibration
Solid
32/40
- Lowest dimension
- Headline, 2/5

Dimensions
- HeadlineJudgment
1 of 2 checks pass. Product category in view: Cookie privacy modal covers about 1350 of 2001 px, roughly 67%, not 80%. Unobstructed part shows only brand names, search placeholder…
- Value & differentiationJudgment
All 3 checks pass. Concrete benefit: Claims: "Early Black Friday Deals from $8", "Extra 20% Off in App only"…
- Design & hierarchyBoth
3 of 5 checks pass. Single focal point: Hero is a pink "Early Black Friday" block mostly covered by the privacy notice; stacked app banner, nav… Heading in first screen: fail.
- Copy & voiceJudgment
Both checks pass. Original wording: "Early Black Friday Deals from $8 + Extra 20% Off in App only" and "Ask Navy" go beyond stock phrases; borderline since mostly sale copy.
- Call to actionBoth
1 of 2 checks pass. Main button in first screen: fail.
- RelevanceBoth
Both checks pass. Guest access: "Sign In or Join Now" is optional link; no welcome back or members-only wall, and the cookie layer has a close X.
- TrustBoth
Both checks pass. Logo in header: "OLD NAVY" wordmark is clearly legible in the header.
- Technical hygieneCheck
3 of 5 checks pass. Page heading: fail. Text size: fail.
Checks
- FailProduct category in viewCookie privacy modal covers about 1350 of 2001 px, roughly 67%, not 80%. Unobstructed part shows only brand names, search placeholder, and "Early Black Friday"; no product or category word.
- FailPage heading
- PassLive hero text
- PassHero offerUnobstructed promo bar reads "Early Black Friday Deals from $8 + Extra 20% Off in App only" and hero says "Early Black Friday".
- FailHeading in first screen
- FailText size
- FailSingle focal pointHero is a pink "Early Black Friday" block mostly covered by the privacy notice; stacked app banner, nav, two promo bars compete and no hero reaches 40%.
- FailMain button in first screen
- PassMain button labelMost prominent button-styled control outside overlays is "Ask Navy" (also "OPEN" app banner); "SHOP NOW" is only a text link. "Ask Navy" starts with imperative verb "Ask".
- PassSearch in first screen
- PassMenu button
- PassOpen search box
- PassHTTPS certificate
- PassImage loading
- PassLogo in header"OLD NAVY" wordmark is clearly legible in the header.
- PassOverlay size
- PassFirst screen unobstructedOverlay is a privacy and cookie notice with no email or SMS field; no promotional signup modal.
- PassPage load
- PassConcrete benefitClaims: "Early Black Friday Deals from $8", "Extra 20% Off in App only", "Free shipping on orders $50+ for Encore Members" give a checkable service claim with a number.
- PassStore-specific benefit"Free shipping on orders $50+ for Encore Members" names the store's own loyalty program and its own threshold; the app-only extra 20% is also store-specific.
- PassOffer termsOffers show amounts "from $8", "Extra 20% Off", "$50+" minimum, plus "Details" links and "Exclusions apply".
- PassOriginal wording"Early Black Friday Deals from $8 + Extra 20% Off in App only" and "Ask Navy" go beyond stock phrases; borderline since mostly sale copy.
- PassTyposNo misspellings or grammar errors visible; "Search for your fave" is casual wordplay, and "Ask Navy" is a product name.
- PassGuest access"Sign In or Join Now" is optional link; no welcome back or members-only wall, and the cookie layer has a close X.
- PassCurrency and region
- PassContact or help link
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